Hey, guys! :D
The Valiard Mansion's Editor, Rob Gross, and I have been hard at work getting the novel ready for print, and the publisher thought it'd be fun to show you guys what we've been up to.
So, I've updated the old Chapter 1 & 2 Preview with the latest edited-for-print version!
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The goal is to make Valiard feel even more authentic, with Victorian-British flavour added to the text wherever it was lacking, removal of anachronisms, updated historical accuracy, and structural changes made to highlight the movie-like pace of the story.
But more than that, I sincerely hope this preview will serve to show faith